Comic story telling - reading what we think the story is.
Hey Guys! Wednesday the 29th of June Been some time since doing drawing. Haven't actually touched work in awhile for the fact behind in other classes. So with what I have with Comic so far, we are showing our stories. Edited thumb layout: Feedback: What Chris (Shirl couldn't read my comic) thought was on the pages, Page 1: School? Page 2: Need more clear on photo, person coming into room? Page 3: clear one way mirror Page 4: 'broken cuff' / wanting to break free. Page 5: ripping face off Page 6: Page 7: More clearify with Darkiplier sending out live recording to compound. Page 8: Need to be clear the character is having fun killing/entertainment Page 9: power active? Page 10: Page 11: Need to be clear with time passing Page 12: Clear the connection with each other characters.